Tuesday, November 6, 2012
Next Big Thing Blog Hop
I am grateful for Tenaya Jayne for making this blog hop pic!
I have been tagged this Wednesday on a Blog Hop called "The Next Big Thing" by http://www.sheerak.wordpress.com . The idea is to talk about your WIP or a recent book, answering 10 questions, and then tagging another 5 author to do the same next week.
What is the title of your book? Reborn
Where did the idea come from for the book? I've been playin around with it in my head.
What genre does your book fall under? Paranormal
Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition? Hayden Panettiere for Angelina, Zac Efron for Ethan, and Rupert Grint for Michael
What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book? Angelina (a vampire hunter) has a good friend that dies and she has to join with a vampire to figure out what had happened.
Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency? I self-published my book.
How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript? First draft, about 6 months total.
What other books would you compare this story to within your genre? Twilight, Drake Chronicles, Sookie Stackhouse series.
Who or What inspired you to write this book? My daughter, I wanted a better life for her.
What else about your book might pique the reader's interest? It's got a little bit of everything for everyone. Romance, suspence, action and it's a New Adult.
Please follow this hop next Wednesday for these following Next Big Thing Blogs!
Tenaya Jayne: http://www.tenayajayne.com/
Ivis Bo Davis: http://www.ivisbodavis.com/
Kevis Hendrickson: http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/16003569-rogue-hunter
Rebekah R. Ganiere: http://vampireswerewolveszombies.blogspot.com/
Becky Pourchot: http://www.beckypourchot.com/
Saturday, October 27, 2012
Happy Halloween!
You can choose to believe this or not but this IS a true story:
I was about 10-12 years old living in Minot, North Dakota and had been staying at a friend's house overnight. We were just being regular young girls having a sleepover when we started some story telling. About part way through the night a lightning storm blew in. There was no rain just lightning and thunder.
We were in her parents living room. They were upstairs asleep. The stair way that led to them was behind us. The front door was on my left. It was an average white door with a small glass window on the top. A few couches sat in front of us and in front of them were 2 glass windows with light curtains hanging from them. On our right was a sliding glass door that led to the side yard which also was covered by a thin material so as to keep people from looking in.
We were laughing and having a fun time when a flash of lightning caught our eye from the door. It looked as if there was someone standing there about to knock. All we could see was a shadow. Thinking someone was there we stopped laughing and started watching intently.
Another flash of lightning lit up a brief shadow of a person with a hat standing just outside their door. The hat was completely even as if the person was looking in the etched glass. We froze in place. The next flash showed no one there. We sighed in relief.
Just as we were about to continue on when a roll of thunder caught our attention causing us to look up again. This time the shadowed head and hat was boxed in one of the windows in front of us. Once again the rim of the hat was flat the head even with the window.
Another flash of lightning showed the shadow on the next window. The rim of the hat slightly bent as if watching the ground as the hatted man walked. By this time we were clenching onto each other in utter freight.
The storm quieted down for a moment as if it held its breath just as we were holding our own. Moments passed like an eternity. Each second dragging on to the next as we waited to for the shadow.
A loud boom echoed across the room with the brightest flash of light I have ever seen lit the entire house. The shadow was now at the sliding glass door. The silhouette was that of an average sized man. We gasped and held onto each other harder. We tried to scream but fear took our voices from us.
Thunder rolled again as the lightning flashed. The man's head was turned directly to us a knife in his right hand as if he was ready to strike.
Darkness surrounded us. We had no redeeming source of light. Even the storm gave us no light as it left us. Time froze as we waited for the man with the hat to enter. Nothing. No one. Silence.
We couldn't wait any longer. We didn't want fate to take us whenever she decided it was time. Together we walked to the door and brushed the coverings aside. There was no one around. We looked as far as we could see down the street and to the side of her house without opening the door, but the only thing that greeted us was the dim glow of the street light next to the entrance of a school a little ways down the road that began to relight as the power turned back on.
We both looked at each other. We hadn't been crazy, we both saw the man. Then we both saw the man disappear. To this day neither one of us have brushed aside the things we saw that night nor will we.
Hope you enjoyed my scary story and thank you for reading. Please feel free to enter the rafflecopter giveaway below!
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Saturday, October 20, 2012
Scarecrow Vampire Teeth Pt. 2
The giveaway for the Scarecrow fangs has officially ended. The winner Teri Rivera was chosen by Random.org. Congradulations Teri!
Wednesday, October 17, 2012
The Ramblings of a Toddler's Mom: Review & Giveaway: Tormented by J. Ann
She gave Tormented 4 stars! Check out her blog below for a chance to win an e-book copy of Tormented and to read the full review! Ends mid-November!
The Ramblings of a Toddler's Mom: Review & Giveaway: Tormented by J. Ann:
The Ramblings of a Toddler's Mom: Review & Giveaway: Tormented by J. Ann:
..."The characters are absolutely fabulous! You have Angy - with her Grey eyes.
She's unlike the other Ultorums not only because of her eyes but she also seems
a tad faster/stronger than everyone else too. She's "special" but no one can
quite explain why or how until much later in the story.
"Then there's Michael - her best friend/potential boyfriend, second highest
ranking Ultorum (right below Angy's father - the Chief) in their area. He's such
a good guy. I LOVE his character. Then of course there's Ethan! Can you say...
YUMMY! He's the first attractive vampire that Angy has seen and oh boy is he one
attractive fella. The other supporting characters are really great. Samantha,
the Chief, the other Ultorum...
"I can't say enough about how creative this story is - it's completely
different from any vampire book I've ever read - and trust me when I say I've
read A LOT of vampire novels in my 26 years. The story has action, fighting,
killing, romance, tension, suspense, compassion, mystery... It really has all
the makings of a great series!
The ending of this story really left me hanging. I NEED to know what
happens because book 1 definitely leaves you hanging. There's so many questions
that haven't been answered yet that I really want answers too."...
The Stuff Of Success: Tormented Review
Please check out her website for the full review!
The Stuff Of Success: Book Review: Tormented by J Ann:
"Tormented was an excellent story and very well written. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Angelina is quite a complex character. Not only do others not understand or truly know her – she is about to learn more about herself than she ever imagined. The romance piece (minimal) is initially similar to a good versus bad type of situation but that isn’t necessarily the case. Since I tend to like the underdogs I love Ethan’s character. There is a great deal left hanging at the end so I am sure J Ann plans to develop a sequel. I thoroughly enjoyed every aspect of this story and each adventure was developed fully. It is easy to feel like you are part of this story and to develop feelings for each character and their roles in society."
The Stuff Of Success: Book Review: Tormented by J Ann:
"Tormented was an excellent story and very well written. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Angelina is quite a complex character. Not only do others not understand or truly know her – she is about to learn more about herself than she ever imagined. The romance piece (minimal) is initially similar to a good versus bad type of situation but that isn’t necessarily the case. Since I tend to like the underdogs I love Ethan’s character. There is a great deal left hanging at the end so I am sure J Ann plans to develop a sequel. I thoroughly enjoyed every aspect of this story and each adventure was developed fully. It is easy to feel like you are part of this story and to develop feelings for each character and their roles in society."
Tuesday, October 16, 2012
Tormented in Print Update
I am really excited to be able to put the natural cover of Tormented on Createspace.com for when it goes to print. I looked over lulu but found nothing. I could have missed it on there but since I spent so much time yesterday downloading the cover I created I am just going to stick with Createspace.com.
Hopefully we will see Tormented out in print by the end of this year! :)
Hopefully we will see Tormented out in print by the end of this year! :)
Friday, October 12, 2012
One Month Anniversary!
Yay! It has been one month today since Tormented was published. Today also marked one week left for the teeth giveaway!
Ways to be entered to win:
If you like my facebook http://www.facebook.com/pages/J-Ann-Novels/472457432774684 page that is one entry, for every person you send that
likes my page and tells me you sent them is another, each blog you follow adds another, and if you comment on either blog that is also an entry.
So lots of ways to enter you name a ton of times. Good
luck!
Tuesday, October 9, 2012
Reviews Needed
If anyone is interested in reviewing Tormented please, please, please let me know. I am grateful to those who have already done so. Thank you.
Monday, October 8, 2012
Interview with Aleja founder of Stay Strong and Stand
I called
Aleja and asked her for an interview that I could post here on my blog for you all. She is the author of "All I Can Do Is Stand" and founder
of 'Stay Strong and Stand'. Her bravery is inspiring and this is her
story.
Me:
How old were you when the
abuse began?
Aleja:
I was 6 months old. My mother left my siblings and I alone in an
apartment and didn't return. When the
police found us they took us to the New York Foundling in Manhattan. I had pneumonia.
When they found my mother she gave
up all rights to me and my siblings. They
separated us, having different families
adopt us. At 40 years old I still don't
know who they are.Then at 2 I was adopted by a deacon and deaconess and that was when the nightmare began.
Me:
What did they do?
Aleja: They
would physically abuse me and mentally as well.
They would dress me nice, but only feed me when the felt like it. They would
call me names like retard, idiot, and liar.
Me: So
they basically only cared about what people saw?
Aleja: Yes.
Me: How
did you get through what your adoptive parents were doing?
Aleja: I
realized I was blessed with a voice.
Singing made all the trauma and abuse bearable. When I would sing I would cry, which was a
relief. I also became active in
church. I joined the choir, attended
bible study, excreta. I even started
writing.
I also learned to sleep with one
eye open. As I got older I wasn't as
scared. I would stay with friends. Though they weren't very good friends. My boyfriends were crack heads, drug addicts,
and abusers as well.I also would drink. A lot. I eventually got up to drinking about a half-gallon of liquor a day. I did try to drink a lot of water to compensate because I was still trying to be conscious about my health.
Me: What
caused you to stop drinking?
Aleja: I
went to the doctor and he gave me clean bill of health even after all of my
drinking. It made me realize that God
had been taking care of me. There was no
other excuse. It made me realize that
there was something important I had to do in my life.
Me: You
mentioned you started to write. At what
age did you first write? What was it?
Aleja: I
started writing in High School. It took
me 4 years to write my book and when I graduated I got my writings in a
book. It was amazing to have that. Then one day I went to go take a bath and
when I got done my book had disappeared.
I didn't write again until I was 25.
Me: What
did you write then?
Aleja: I
wrote "Being Alive". It was my
first poem I had written after my book had been stolen. In 2006 I wrote "Only The Strong Can
Survive" it was published by America Published. They also published other book of my poetry,
"Beautiful Poetic Strategy and Recovery" in 2008.
They didn't get it out very well
so I decided to become a self-published author.
Since then I have published 8 more books on my own.
Me:
Can you tell me a little bit
about your family?
Aleja:
My daughter is going to college
in Wisconsin. I unfortunately went
through a hard time and my grandmother had to take care of her when she was
younger but I still tried to be there for her.
One day she broke her foot while
at school. I gave everything I had
including my rent money to be there for her.
She is my daughter, I was just being a good mother. My grandmother thought I was an idiot for
doing that.The rest of my family was around when they found out I published my first book, but when they realized that I didn't make a lot of money off of it they all disappeared again.
Me: Is
there anything you wish you could say to those reading this or those going
through something similar?
Aleja: Yes. Find out what your purpose is. Find out why the enemy wants to destroy
you. When it comes down to it be the
winner. Don't let the destroyer, destroy
you.
Me: Thank
you so much for doing this interview.
Aleja: Thank
you for calling me.
Saturday, October 6, 2012
Stay Strong and Stand My Story
I met Author Aleja Bennett through Book Blogs. She is an abuse survior to check out her story please log on to http://www.facebook.com/StayStrongandStand#!/StayStrongandStand/info as for me this is mine and I will be the first to admit it isn't as bad as others but it's bad enough that I should have taken a stand.
I was in the 4th grade, my brothers in 5th, they both shared the same teacher. He was an old, overweight, disgusting pig of a man. He was very aggressive to his students or at least to my brothers by grabbing so tightly to their arms he would leave bruise marks, yank them by their ears, and literally throw them out of class. Now, I don't know how many other students he treated that way. Anyway, one day I went to go meet up with my brothers and he waved me to come into the class room. He placed his hands down my back pocket of my jeans. It freaked me out but I didn't say anything. Shortly thereafter, I left the school with my brothers.
I was in the 4th grade, my brothers in 5th, they both shared the same teacher. He was an old, overweight, disgusting pig of a man. He was very aggressive to his students or at least to my brothers by grabbing so tightly to their arms he would leave bruise marks, yank them by their ears, and literally throw them out of class. Now, I don't know how many other students he treated that way. Anyway, one day I went to go meet up with my brothers and he waved me to come into the class room. He placed his hands down my back pocket of my jeans. It freaked me out but I didn't say anything. Shortly thereafter, I left the school with my brothers.
The next day was the best day for my brothers. He didn't say or do anything mean to them all
day. After a while things got back to
the way they had been before and once again I stopped by to pick up my brothers
thinking it had been a onetime occurrence.
While waiting for my brother to get their bags from the hallway he again
told me to come to him and again put his hand down my pocket.
I didn't know what else to do. I was afraid to tell anyone, afraid they would be angry at me for being stupid and I
didn't want him to treat my brothers the way that he did so I continued to go
back. Over and over again the process would play and the days after that I was
there he would treat my brothers better.
So to make my brothers lives a little better I started to frequent there
often.
Slowly he progressed forward to place a hand in my front
pocket, then later he slipped a finger down the waist of my jeans in the
back. Luckily school got out before
things got worse. I prayed every day
that summer that I wouldn't get him as a teacher and the Lord heard my
prayers. From that day forward I was
able to avoid him and that room until I left the school after my 6th grade.
I heard when I was in 9th grade that he lost his job and
(rumor had it) they had locked up his worthless butt because someone had
finally spoke up. I hadn't been the only
girl he had done that to. Nor do I fear I was the worst. There had been at least 2 others before
someone had spoken up.
Looking back at it and knowing what I know now, I do
everything in my power to let younger girls know, that it's not okay. When people do that it's not okay. That if they are ever placed in a situation
like that to tell an adult. I was afraid
of my parents when I was going through it but I could have gone to another
person of authority like the principle.
When I finally told my parents they were horrified that I
hadn't told them. Both of my parents
were angry at him and hurt that I didn't trust them enough to tell them back
then. My dad was ready to drive all the
way back there and inform them (probably not in a good way he was that angry
that someone had done this to his daughter and his sons) of what had happened,
but I told him that he had already been taken care of. As I said before I know what I went through
wasn't as bad as some others. I can't
imagine what others have gone through in their lives, but what I went through
it's bad enough.
If you are ever in that position or have ever been in that
position don't be afraid to speak up.
Even a little evil, is still evil.
Friday, October 5, 2012
Scarecrow Vampire Teeth Giveaway!
So I've been trying to think of a giveaway for Halloween, because what other day can you have so much fun with? :) Finally, I decided on giving away a pair of Scarecrow fangs!
I myself have a pair of these and love them!
They come with a kit so you can custom fit them to your teeth!
I will be doing a drawing on the 19th for the winner.
To be entered is easy.
If you like my facebook http://www.facebook.com/pages/J-Ann-Novels/472457432774684 page that is one entry, for every person you send that likes my page and tells me you sent them is another, each blog you follow is adds another, and if you comment on either blog that is also an entry.
So lots of ways to enter you name a ton of times. Good luck!
Wednesday, October 3, 2012
YAY!!!
I just want to thank everyone who like J Ann Novels on Facebook. It now has 100 likes and 2 lucky winners! They were Bebe Balocca and Pamela Reddy! Let's keep it going!
Tuesday, October 2, 2012
Poll Games!
For the month of October there is a poll for who you hope Angelina ends up with. I am curious for everyones answers.
Sunday, September 30, 2012
New Review for Tormented
My first blog review written by Unorthodox Mama gave Tormented 5 (Huge) stars! Here is a blurp of what she wrote:
"This book is amazing. Nothing I can say could ever do this book enough justice.
It’s got such a unique spin on the world of humans, vampires and what not. You won’t find yourself thinking “not another vampire book”.
Instead you will finish the book thinking “this is THE vampire book""
It’s got such a unique spin on the world of humans, vampires and what not. You won’t find yourself thinking “not another vampire book”.
Instead you will finish the book thinking “this is THE vampire book""
To see the rest of the review please log on to her website at:
Saturday, September 29, 2012
To be Maria
Hey,
I just met Deanna Proach and wanted to share her new book called To be Maria:
Book Description
Seventeen-year-old Anya Preschnikov wants to become a famous actress but she's faced with two problems. Her father ignores her and doesn't have any money to support her. At school, she's bullied on a daily basis, yet she believes that she will gain her stepping-stone to stardom if she's accepted by her peers.
All of this changes when Maria Hernandez--an immigrant from Spain--comes to Peach Valley Senior High. Maria knows what it takes to fit in. She's assertive, confident and she dresses suggestively, characteristics that all of the popular kids admire. Yet she sees in Anya what no one else sees: beauty and talent.
When Maria extends her hand of friendship, Anya is elated. Her rise to popularity is about to become a reality, but it ends at a house party when a boy's rude comment sends her into a rage.
Desperate to belong somewhere, Anya and Maria seek new friends outside of school. They meet Alex and Marissa, a young couple who eagerly welcomes them into their world of parties and drugs. Anya and Maria soon find out that Alex is a drug dealer, but they are so lured by his wealth, good looks and aggressive confidence that they can't resist his friendship. They don't know that Alex's gang is at war with a rival gang--one that's run by Anya's older brother, Adrik--until one incident puts their lives in danger's path. To make matters worse, Alex won't let Anya and Maria out of his sight. The two teens are forced to make a decision that's a matter of life or death.
To be Maria's First Chapter
Anya wakes, startled by the loud, repetitive beep of her alarm clock. In a daze, she reaches over to the small night stand and slaps the stop button. She groans, her tired eyes half-closed, while she slips out from underneath the old, but comfortable blanket. Great. I'm so tired. If only I had two more hours - but no. When there's no school, there's work, and that's even worse. I hate that I have to get up at five-thirty every Saturday and Sunday morning. My manager always gives me the worst shifts.
Anya shuffles over to the closet. Unlike most other girls in school, she never rummages through the closet in search of the perfect outfit. She rolls her eyes. Oh God, here we go again: the same jeans, faded tank-tops, baggy T-shirts, and sweatshirts. I can't wait until the day comes when I throw away these ugly clothes. I just wish I had the money to buy new clothes, fashionable clothes. Maybe then I'd fit in at school.
Anya traces her finger over the delicate cloth of her one and only bohemian-style summer dress. Even the dress is a hand-me-down, worn by her mother back in the 1970s. But it's the only piece of clothing she loves; unfortunately, it's still too cold outside to wear it. Thank God for my imagination. I don't know what I'd do without it.
The things Anya enjoys the most are brushing her hair and writing in her journal. These are the only times she can let her imagination take her away from home. She can pretend to be anything - anything but herself.
Anya rakes her slender fingers through her long hair. Today, I'm the daughter of a wealthy architect, so I'm going to wear a pair of Tommy Hilfiger jeans and a green peasant top, the revealing one. Then I'll put on that expensive necklace and those silver hoop earrings that Mom bought for me yesterday. Anya frowns at her clothes. Ugh, who are you kidding, Anya? Why even waste your time pretending to have something when it makes you even more unhappy to realize that you don't have it?
To get her mind off her clothes, Anya looks at her mother's photograph, the one that always sits on top of the nightstand. Every time she looks at the photograph, she studies her mother's features. Her father used to tell her that she looks so much like her mother, Ana Preschnikov, but until now she never gave it much thought. Anya now realizes why her father used to call her Ana. Ana - who must have been in her early twenties when this photo was taken - boasted the same long, caramel brown hair, chocolate brown eyes, petite, heart-shaped face, slender nose, and smooth, cream-colored skin. Anya often wonders what life would be like if her mother was still alive. It has been so many years since she passed away that Anya has forgotten what it's like to have a mother. Sometimes she dreams about her mother, longing for the comfort of her tender arms and loving words.
Her eyes eventually shift away from the photograph to the journal sitting on the floor in front of the nightstand. The front and back cover is of a soft blue and leather. She received it as a Christmas gift from her best friend, Patrick, a little over one year ago. Since then, she's filled it with her thoughts until only a few empty pages remain; she's planned to leave those pages blank until she purchased another journal - something she's decided to do after work this weekend.
"Oh heck, I can't wait until the weekend. I really need to clear my mind," she whispers. She changes into a T-shirt and a pair of jeans, grabs the journal off the floor, then walks over to the kitchen.
The kitchen is messier than usual. Two of the cupboard doors are left open, the sink is filled with dirty dishes, and the counter is littered with stale food, wrappers, cutlery, and cups half-filled with juice. As she bites down hard on her lower lip, she can feel the red creep up her neck and over her face. Damnit! Why doesn't my dad clean up after himself? Why does he expect me and Sophia to clean up after him all the time? She sinks into the nearest chair, breathing out a long, angry sigh. Her stomach growls, warning that if she doesn't eat she'll spend the entire day tripping over her words and suffering from exhaustion and a bad headache - something she's endured several times in the past.
Anya leaves her journal, then walks over to one of the open cupboards. As predicted, it's empty - save one box of macaroni and cheese and a package of Mr. Noodles. Anya shuts the door, then peers into the next cupboard; all that remains in there is a box of Cheerios. She grabs the box, realizing that it's more than half-empty but thinking that it should be enough to satisfy her until lunch.
As she opens the fridge door, she hears a shuffling noise from behind. Thinking that it's Sophia, she turns, ready for a round of confrontation; but it's her father, who stands less than one foot away from the doorway. He's hardly ever up this early, so Anya is surprised to see him. For the first time in a long time, he's clean shaven, dressed in a red, button-down, flannel shirt that's tucked into blue jeans. Anya suspects that his clothes are also clean because she doesn't smell any foul stench.
Anya cocks her left eyebrow. "You're up early."
"Yeah, I got a new job."
"Where?"
"At Home Depot."
Anya purses her lips. That's not a step up from your last job at Canadian Tire. "Cool. Is the pay better?"
"Yeah, enough to get me by."
Anya narrows her eyes. "Well, I hope you last at this job," she says, slamming the milk and Cheerios down on the table. It's enough to get us by, you self-centered jerk. I hope your new boss doesn't fire your dumb ass like your last boss did.
"I think so. You gonna clean this up?" he says, pointing at the counter.
Anya glares at him. "Uh, no."
"Why not?"
"Because you were the one who made the damn mess. That's why!"
He casts her a sharp look. "Don't talk to me like that, young lady."
"I can talk to you however I want!"
"Fine then, be that way. I'm off."
"Clean your stinking mess when you get home from work!" Anya yells after him. She slumps into a chair, her eyes brimming with tears. "Don't cry. He's not worth it. Don't let him get you down," she whispers over and over again until the anger ebbs. But when she looks down at the diary, the feeling returns. She flips through it until she comes to a blank page.
'February 17, 2003. Dear Diary,' she writes underneath the date in the top left corner of the empty page.
'This day is not off to a good start.'
She then writes about her dad, describing him using every foul word in the English language. Once she's spilled her anger and frustration onto the paper, she breathes out a huge sigh, which makes her feel much better. She doesn't want to spend every minute of the day thinking about the people who get her down.
'I'm sorry I used all that bad language. I just needed to let off steam. Anyway, it's time to tell you about the good stuff in my life.
'I'm still really excitement that I got accepted into Mr. Hawthorne's advanced acting class. I know, I already told you this - Patrick's sick of hearing me say this - but this is the best thing that's ever happened to me. Mr. Hawthorne doesn't accept anyone into his advanced acting class. Over a hundred students auditioned this year, and out of those auditions he chose only sixteen students to be in his class. The fact that he chose me over several other good actors is a huge gold feather in my cap.'
'Every year, Mr. Hawthorne sponsors one student to attend Vancouver Film School. His sponsorship pays for one year's tuition. This will give me a huge start to my career. I'm busting my ass to show Mr. Hawthorne the best of me because I'm determined to be the recipient of his sponsorship.'
As Anya pauses to flex her wrist, she steals a glance at her wrist watch. It reads seven 'o' clock. Thankfully, there's still some spare time to write; she hasn't told her journal everything she needs to say.
'There's this new girl in school. She's our age, and she's in our grad class. Her name is Maria, and she's from Spain, the country everyone seems to think is cool. There's so many Spanish people who live in this city that it's no wonder why most of them go wide-eyed when they think about Spain. I've never been to Europe, but I imagine that Spain's a beautiful country, though I don't think it's any better than any other country in Europe. Or every other country in this world, for that matter. I think it's the way Maria dresses and the way she acts that everyone finds so attractive. Well, the popular kids mostly. She's been at Peach Valley Senior High for only two weeks, and she's already at the top of the popularity chain. Patrick thinks she's a slut, an easy layover. That's why all the boys are so gaga over her. But I don't know if that's true. I personally think she's drop-dead gorgeous.'
Anya's eyes droop when she thinks about Maria.
'Her clothes are so stylish. I wish I had those kinds of clothes, and - I know I say this almost every day - I wish I was as popular as her. I'd like to get to know Maria - she'd be the coolest friend I'd ever have - but Carly beat me to it. Carly befriended her the moment she set foot in Peach Valley Senior High. Maria's in two of my classes, and sometimes I see her in the hallway, but she never says anything to me. It's no wonder why, though. She's Carly's friend. Anyway, I think I've told you enough information for one day. I gotta get ready for school. Until next time.
Love Anya.'
To find out more
Please go to her website http://www.desstories.blogspot.ca/
Hope you all enjoy!
I just met Deanna Proach and wanted to share her new book called To be Maria:
Book Description
Seventeen-year-old Anya Preschnikov wants to become a famous actress but she's faced with two problems. Her father ignores her and doesn't have any money to support her. At school, she's bullied on a daily basis, yet she believes that she will gain her stepping-stone to stardom if she's accepted by her peers.
All of this changes when Maria Hernandez--an immigrant from Spain--comes to Peach Valley Senior High. Maria knows what it takes to fit in. She's assertive, confident and she dresses suggestively, characteristics that all of the popular kids admire. Yet she sees in Anya what no one else sees: beauty and talent.
When Maria extends her hand of friendship, Anya is elated. Her rise to popularity is about to become a reality, but it ends at a house party when a boy's rude comment sends her into a rage.
Desperate to belong somewhere, Anya and Maria seek new friends outside of school. They meet Alex and Marissa, a young couple who eagerly welcomes them into their world of parties and drugs. Anya and Maria soon find out that Alex is a drug dealer, but they are so lured by his wealth, good looks and aggressive confidence that they can't resist his friendship. They don't know that Alex's gang is at war with a rival gang--one that's run by Anya's older brother, Adrik--until one incident puts their lives in danger's path. To make matters worse, Alex won't let Anya and Maria out of his sight. The two teens are forced to make a decision that's a matter of life or death.
To be Maria's First Chapter
Anya wakes, startled by the loud, repetitive beep of her alarm clock. In a daze, she reaches over to the small night stand and slaps the stop button. She groans, her tired eyes half-closed, while she slips out from underneath the old, but comfortable blanket. Great. I'm so tired. If only I had two more hours - but no. When there's no school, there's work, and that's even worse. I hate that I have to get up at five-thirty every Saturday and Sunday morning. My manager always gives me the worst shifts.
Anya shuffles over to the closet. Unlike most other girls in school, she never rummages through the closet in search of the perfect outfit. She rolls her eyes. Oh God, here we go again: the same jeans, faded tank-tops, baggy T-shirts, and sweatshirts. I can't wait until the day comes when I throw away these ugly clothes. I just wish I had the money to buy new clothes, fashionable clothes. Maybe then I'd fit in at school.
Anya traces her finger over the delicate cloth of her one and only bohemian-style summer dress. Even the dress is a hand-me-down, worn by her mother back in the 1970s. But it's the only piece of clothing she loves; unfortunately, it's still too cold outside to wear it. Thank God for my imagination. I don't know what I'd do without it.
The things Anya enjoys the most are brushing her hair and writing in her journal. These are the only times she can let her imagination take her away from home. She can pretend to be anything - anything but herself.
Anya rakes her slender fingers through her long hair. Today, I'm the daughter of a wealthy architect, so I'm going to wear a pair of Tommy Hilfiger jeans and a green peasant top, the revealing one. Then I'll put on that expensive necklace and those silver hoop earrings that Mom bought for me yesterday. Anya frowns at her clothes. Ugh, who are you kidding, Anya? Why even waste your time pretending to have something when it makes you even more unhappy to realize that you don't have it?
To get her mind off her clothes, Anya looks at her mother's photograph, the one that always sits on top of the nightstand. Every time she looks at the photograph, she studies her mother's features. Her father used to tell her that she looks so much like her mother, Ana Preschnikov, but until now she never gave it much thought. Anya now realizes why her father used to call her Ana. Ana - who must have been in her early twenties when this photo was taken - boasted the same long, caramel brown hair, chocolate brown eyes, petite, heart-shaped face, slender nose, and smooth, cream-colored skin. Anya often wonders what life would be like if her mother was still alive. It has been so many years since she passed away that Anya has forgotten what it's like to have a mother. Sometimes she dreams about her mother, longing for the comfort of her tender arms and loving words.
Her eyes eventually shift away from the photograph to the journal sitting on the floor in front of the nightstand. The front and back cover is of a soft blue and leather. She received it as a Christmas gift from her best friend, Patrick, a little over one year ago. Since then, she's filled it with her thoughts until only a few empty pages remain; she's planned to leave those pages blank until she purchased another journal - something she's decided to do after work this weekend.
"Oh heck, I can't wait until the weekend. I really need to clear my mind," she whispers. She changes into a T-shirt and a pair of jeans, grabs the journal off the floor, then walks over to the kitchen.
The kitchen is messier than usual. Two of the cupboard doors are left open, the sink is filled with dirty dishes, and the counter is littered with stale food, wrappers, cutlery, and cups half-filled with juice. As she bites down hard on her lower lip, she can feel the red creep up her neck and over her face. Damnit! Why doesn't my dad clean up after himself? Why does he expect me and Sophia to clean up after him all the time? She sinks into the nearest chair, breathing out a long, angry sigh. Her stomach growls, warning that if she doesn't eat she'll spend the entire day tripping over her words and suffering from exhaustion and a bad headache - something she's endured several times in the past.
Anya leaves her journal, then walks over to one of the open cupboards. As predicted, it's empty - save one box of macaroni and cheese and a package of Mr. Noodles. Anya shuts the door, then peers into the next cupboard; all that remains in there is a box of Cheerios. She grabs the box, realizing that it's more than half-empty but thinking that it should be enough to satisfy her until lunch.
As she opens the fridge door, she hears a shuffling noise from behind. Thinking that it's Sophia, she turns, ready for a round of confrontation; but it's her father, who stands less than one foot away from the doorway. He's hardly ever up this early, so Anya is surprised to see him. For the first time in a long time, he's clean shaven, dressed in a red, button-down, flannel shirt that's tucked into blue jeans. Anya suspects that his clothes are also clean because she doesn't smell any foul stench.
Anya cocks her left eyebrow. "You're up early."
"Yeah, I got a new job."
"Where?"
"At Home Depot."
Anya purses her lips. That's not a step up from your last job at Canadian Tire. "Cool. Is the pay better?"
"Yeah, enough to get me by."
Anya narrows her eyes. "Well, I hope you last at this job," she says, slamming the milk and Cheerios down on the table. It's enough to get us by, you self-centered jerk. I hope your new boss doesn't fire your dumb ass like your last boss did.
"I think so. You gonna clean this up?" he says, pointing at the counter.
Anya glares at him. "Uh, no."
"Why not?"
"Because you were the one who made the damn mess. That's why!"
He casts her a sharp look. "Don't talk to me like that, young lady."
"I can talk to you however I want!"
"Fine then, be that way. I'm off."
"Clean your stinking mess when you get home from work!" Anya yells after him. She slumps into a chair, her eyes brimming with tears. "Don't cry. He's not worth it. Don't let him get you down," she whispers over and over again until the anger ebbs. But when she looks down at the diary, the feeling returns. She flips through it until she comes to a blank page.
'February 17, 2003. Dear Diary,' she writes underneath the date in the top left corner of the empty page.
'This day is not off to a good start.'
She then writes about her dad, describing him using every foul word in the English language. Once she's spilled her anger and frustration onto the paper, she breathes out a huge sigh, which makes her feel much better. She doesn't want to spend every minute of the day thinking about the people who get her down.
'I'm sorry I used all that bad language. I just needed to let off steam. Anyway, it's time to tell you about the good stuff in my life.
'I'm still really excitement that I got accepted into Mr. Hawthorne's advanced acting class. I know, I already told you this - Patrick's sick of hearing me say this - but this is the best thing that's ever happened to me. Mr. Hawthorne doesn't accept anyone into his advanced acting class. Over a hundred students auditioned this year, and out of those auditions he chose only sixteen students to be in his class. The fact that he chose me over several other good actors is a huge gold feather in my cap.'
'Every year, Mr. Hawthorne sponsors one student to attend Vancouver Film School. His sponsorship pays for one year's tuition. This will give me a huge start to my career. I'm busting my ass to show Mr. Hawthorne the best of me because I'm determined to be the recipient of his sponsorship.'
As Anya pauses to flex her wrist, she steals a glance at her wrist watch. It reads seven 'o' clock. Thankfully, there's still some spare time to write; she hasn't told her journal everything she needs to say.
'There's this new girl in school. She's our age, and she's in our grad class. Her name is Maria, and she's from Spain, the country everyone seems to think is cool. There's so many Spanish people who live in this city that it's no wonder why most of them go wide-eyed when they think about Spain. I've never been to Europe, but I imagine that Spain's a beautiful country, though I don't think it's any better than any other country in Europe. Or every other country in this world, for that matter. I think it's the way Maria dresses and the way she acts that everyone finds so attractive. Well, the popular kids mostly. She's been at Peach Valley Senior High for only two weeks, and she's already at the top of the popularity chain. Patrick thinks she's a slut, an easy layover. That's why all the boys are so gaga over her. But I don't know if that's true. I personally think she's drop-dead gorgeous.'
Anya's eyes droop when she thinks about Maria.
'Her clothes are so stylish. I wish I had those kinds of clothes, and - I know I say this almost every day - I wish I was as popular as her. I'd like to get to know Maria - she'd be the coolest friend I'd ever have - but Carly beat me to it. Carly befriended her the moment she set foot in Peach Valley Senior High. Maria's in two of my classes, and sometimes I see her in the hallway, but she never says anything to me. It's no wonder why, though. She's Carly's friend. Anyway, I think I've told you enough information for one day. I gotta get ready for school. Until next time.
Love Anya.'
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Friday, September 28, 2012
Tuesday, September 25, 2012
Long Days Ahead
Well after a long day of typing I am now into the 3rd Chapter of the second book in the Immortals Saga. Granted I am only in the rough/rough draft version it felt good to get something done today!
Sunday, September 23, 2012
Tormented: Chapter 1
A wolf howled in the distance as
Angelina tucked a strand of her unruly, wavy, blonde hair behind her ear. She paused a moment looking around the area
double checking that she was alone before entering the old abandoned warehouse. No one was permitted to leave the city
boundaries by themselves for their own safety and protection. The warehouse was located just outside the
walls. She had snuck through a cracked
part of the wall she had discovered a few weeks ago during her daily run. The crack was so narrow, that she had barely
squeezed in between the gap.
The building had at one point been
used for scientific research but an explosion over 30 years ago forced the
research team to close it down. Now
abandoned with no electricity running through it anymore; the only source of
light she had was from the full moon outside.
It shone dimly through the big windows that were now broken from years
of neglect. She didn’t want to bring a
flashlight because it would have drawn too much attention. The warehouse had now become the perfect place
to find what she was looking for. She
waited a moment as her eyes adjusted to the darkness. Even though she still couldn’t see as well as
she would have liked, she knew immediately that she wasn’t alone.
“She’s
mine,” a tenor voice echoed in the darkness.
Angelina spun towards the sound.
Clenching her hands, she tried to keep them from shaking. Thrill mixed with fear filled her making her
heart beat faster. Slowly, the man who
had spoken emerged from the shadows. He
didn’t appear to be much older than Angelina.
He wore a pair of tight dark blue jeans with a flannel button down shirt
tucked into them. A big gold belt buckle
caught her eye. On either side of the
‘cowboy,’ two women slinked out. They
both had blonde hair.
The woman on his right had her hair
cut short in a pixie style. She also
looked about 23 or 24. She had pale blue
shorts and white tank top. On her feet
she wore strappy wedges, perfect for the end of summer heat.
The woman on his left however had
long hair and she had pulled it back into a pony. She looked older than the other two, most
likely in her mid-30s. She wore black leather pants and a tight shirt to
match. On the base of her neck was a
thick choker.
Though they looked and dressed
completely different from each other; they all had one thing in common, they
all looked hungry. Their irises were
just as black as a moonless night.
“Who are
you?” Angelina managed to ask surprising herself by the tone of her own voice.
“Who or
what,” the man began, “do you think we are?”
Staring at him blankly she took a step back. He cocked his head slightly waiting for her
answer. Angelina’s gaze dropped to his
lips as they formed a wicked smile, exposing his white teeth. His upper canines slowly grew to a sharp
point.
“Vampires,”
she whispered in unbelief. “You exist?”
she asked swallowing hard realizing their plan.
His smile widened. Angelina
glanced around, “Maybe this wasn’t the best time to come here,” she chuckled
nervously. All 3 of them glanced down at
her neck.
The woman on his right deliberately
licked her lips, “Let’s get on with it.
I’m hungry,” she moaned.
Angelina
took one more step back, slamming into a wall behind her. “Well it was nice meeting you all, sort of.”
The other
female attacked. Angelina dodged the vampiress’s
swift advances. Angelina’s demeanor
changed from scared prey to overwhelming laughter in an instant. “One thing is for sure, you nitwits are so
predictable,” she said rolling her dark grey eyes. The air around them all grew thick, anger now
filling each of her attacker’s eyes. The
woman that was ‘hungry,’ now charged.
Angelina grabbed her arm and then swung the female vampire into the wall
that up until a moment ago Angelina had been cornered into. Pulling a dagger out from under the back of
her shirt Angelina swiftly pierced the vampiress’s heart.
An ear
shattering scream filled the air. The
woman disintegrated into dust right before Angelina’s very eyes. The other two vampires stood frozen
momentarily in shock. They glanced at
each other than at Angelina. Together
they stormed towards her pinning her down.
Yes, do bite me and see what
happens, Angelina thought as she smiled to herself. She had dosed herself heavily with Locine
before she had left that morning.
It was a terrible way for a vampire
to go. The drug would destroy their
desire to eat. Essentially making the
loathsome creatures die from hunger, and she didn’t feel a bit guilty about
it. Her job was to protect her
people. The best way for that to happen
was to take as many of them out as she could.
“FREEZE!” a deep masculine voice
shouted. Angelina not only heard the
word with her ears, but it also rang so loud in her head she did just that, she
froze from pure shock. The smile faded
from her lips. Her eyes darted towards
the far corner of the room where the exclamation had come from. The creature who had spoken had up until that
moment covered his power from her, a power unlike anything she had ever felt
before as an Ultorum. He moved towards
them. She couldn’t see him do it but she
did feel him. Her body tingled slightly
as if he had just brushed up against her.
“She has Locine in her veins. I
can smell it,” he continued his tone even, flat, as if he was bored. Angelina cursed to herself.
“Seriously?”
the woman cried out frustrated.
“Damn it-,”
the cowboy swore. He glared at her then
with one purposeful blow he knocked her out.
When she came to she found herself in an alleyway back in the middle of
Midway. How she had gotten there she
didn’t know. She was far away from where
she had been previously. She rubbed her
head surprised she had even awoken in the first place.
“Angelina?”
a frantic call cried in her head.
“Yeah
Spence,” she answered still rubbing the spot where she had been hit.
“Oh my
goodness, whew,” he replied relieved.
“We thought we had lost ya there for a while. Your boyfriend over here has been freaking
out. He was just about to send a
squadron to your location. Frankly he’s
been getting on my nerves.” Angelina
pictured Spencer glaring at Michael as he spoke, “He hasn’t left my office in
hours. He just kept walking back and
forth, and back and forth again, asking if I had heard from you like every five
minutes,” the annoyance in his voice was very obvious. Slowly, she began to stand trying to ignore
the pounding ache on the side of her head.
“You didn’t go out on your own again did you?”
“No,” she
lied, “and Mike’s not my boyfriend.” An
older woman that was walking by looked at her wildly. “Ultorum,” she almost shouted from
aggravation. The woman glanced at her
grey eyes, huffed, and then walked away.
Ultorum is
Latin for avenger. To the general public
Ultorums are thought of as a higher trained Police Force. They are a specially trained tactics and
analysis team. They observe and keep the
city or town for which they live, in-order.
However, there are certain differences between Ultorums and the regular
Police. First most are trained from a
younger age. They are found and brought
to train during their senior year of High School. A few select even brought sooner. Until Angelina, they had always been spotted
by their intensely green eyes. Second,
they are stronger and faster than their partners. Third, they fight the supernatural, namely
vampires. The general public had no
knowledge about the third part. If they
ever found out mass hysteria would inevitably follow.
“Don’t lie
to me Ang-,” Spencer warned. Angelina
rolled her eyes, “And don’t roll your eyes at me, I know you are.”
“Okay, fine
I’ll try not to roll my eyes at you,” she shot back sarcastically.
“Ang,” he
sighed, “the boss ain’t gonna be happy about this. That’s twice in a month.”
She nodded
her head in response her shoulders slumping slightly, “I know.”
* * *
The
Ultorum’s Agency was a two story building comprised of a small infirmary, a gym
with male and female locker rooms, and a communications room all on the first
floor. The second held three classrooms,
the general office area, and then the Chief’s office just beyond that.
When
Angelina arrived she immediately ran up the stairs and headed towards the
Chief’s door. Noticing it shut, she
paused by the main classroom where everyone received their first hour of the
seven hours of training. The students in
the room were all between the ages of 17 and 18. Angelina smiled remembering her first
days. It seemed like such a long time
ago, a lifetime. “The thing you need to know about vampires,” Mr. Ling, the
instructor, began, “is that they do exist.
In fact, you may have even been used by them without even realizing
it.” His receding hair line was the only
evidence that he had aged. He even wore
the same glasses he had when she was in his class. “They have telepathic abilities that make you
believe, do, and remember what they want you to. They can heal any bite they create so the
next day you have no recollection of what took place.
“When you
see them you might be surprised. Apart
from their eyes they will look exactly like us.
There isn’t some kind of magical power that changes the appearance of a
person when they become one of the affected.
Nothing makes them have taut, sexy bodies with rock hard abs and perfect
hair, like a creature out of some kind of romance novel. That is unless, like us they have worked for
it.” Angelina laughed to herself; she
knew that for a fact. In the 4 years she
had been an Ultorum in the field, she hadn’t found a single attractive one yet.
“ANGELINA!” the Chief yelled. She jumped in surprise. Bowing her head again she headed towards his
office. “Close the door,” he
commanded. Without hesitation she
obeyed. His office walls were covered
with awards he and his team had received when he was an active field
agent. His desk (one of the few pieces
of furniture in his office) was almost completely bare except for a plaque that
held all the names of those Ultorums who had lost their life for the cause and
a thin tablet that was his personal computer.
He was an
average sized, middle-aged man. He still
had a good thick head of hair, though it was beginning to turn grey. He often wore button up shirts and slacks to
work sometimes he would even include a tie.
However, today he adorned a faded navy polo shirt with a light pair of
khakis.
He waved
his hand towards the chairs that sat on the other side of his desk. “I don’t get you,” he continued slightly
cooler, “how many times do I have to tell you this Ang?” Angelina frowned slightly as she sat down. His red face looked as if it might explode, a
vein in the middle of his forehead had begun to throb, “YOU are supposed to go
to YOUR post and stay there until your relief arrives. After that you are supposed to head BACK here
and report to me. Not disappear for
hours on end; going who knows where for who knows how long after your shift has
ended.”
Angelina
took a moment before responding; “Whatever happened to equal opportunity then
chief?” she questioned quietly. “Ever
since what’s her face died in London, you took me off my team and now
continually station me to the stupidest part of the city.”
“It’s not
the stupidest part,” the Chief interjected.
“Really,
the Town Hall isn’t the stupidest part?”
Angelina crossed her arms defiantly, “Then please enlighten me on the
location that is worse to protect than the one where, if our enemies were to
invade, they would have to kill everyone in town to even get there. Not to mention sending me there in broad
daylight,” she emphasized by waving her hand towards the glass window.
The chief
cleared his throat. “I know that you
ranked number one on most of the exams, and broke most of our records but,” he
hesitated. Angelina knew what was
coming. She couldn’t even count how many
times she had heard the next bit before.
“You are different, special in so many ways. I mean even your eyes are different than
ours.” She locked gazes with his light
green eyes.
“Oh so that’s it,” she mocked knowing she was
pushing the boundaries. If possible his
face turned redder, almost purple. “It’s
not because I am a girl, well that’s a relief.”
“Well, you
are one of the few that are. Stephanie
hardly even goes out as a field agent, yet you never hear her complaining. Liz, the only other female potential for
years to come, is in training and if
she passes she’ll probably relieve Spencer at that time. You
however bring an opportunity that no one, and when I say no one I mean no one,
else can. That being said yes, it is
from your eyes. If you and one of the
other Ultorums…say Michael-”
“What?” she
demanded cutting him off, “What if I don’t want to just stop everything, marry
an Ultorum and become a mother? Am I
just supposed to roll over just because everyone thinks I’ll bring in the next
generation of protectors? All my life
after you and mom found out my own ‘potential’ everyone who knows anything
about what we do or who we really are, has told me that, ‘that fact alone
should make me proud’.” She deflated
slightly, “You of all people know me…you know that I can’t just like lie down
and let everyone tell me who I am or what I should do. So why can’t I be treated like an equal?”
“To be
honest sweetheart, I don’t want to lose you,” he countered softening a little,
“And you are right. I don’t want to lose
the possibility of having more Ultorums like you. Not only are you faster, stronger, and,” he
cleared his throat, “obviously more spirited than most around here but you can
also blend in. Imagine the possibilities
if there were more Ultorums like you, men and women that would be able to blend
into their environment and not be spotted a mile away. You can’t blame me for wanting the best for
our future.” Angelina’s head dropped in
submission; she knew that was the end of it.
The Chief, her father, had made up his mind.
“Your right
sir, I’m sorry,” she muttered after a moment of silence.
“You are
dismissed,” he waved her out. She got up
to leave, “And,” he quickly called out, “if you ever decide to go out on your
own again, I will personally kick you off the division…permanently.”
Saturday, September 22, 2012
Friday, September 21, 2012
My first book is now availiable on Amazon and Barnes and Noble as an ebook. Here is a snippet of Tormented:
Pulling out her gun again, she kicked him over, slammed a foot down on his chest, and pointed it at him. “Why did you cross into the city?” she demanded. He began to laugh. “ANSWER ME!” she ordered cocking her gun.
“I don’t take orders from you either,” he laughed wickedly. It was then that she felt it. The same power she had felt the other day. She knew it was too ...
Pulling out her gun again, she kicked him over, slammed a foot down on his chest, and pointed it at him. “Why did you cross into the city?” she demanded. He began to laugh. “ANSWER ME!” she ordered cocking her gun.
“I don’t take orders from you either,” he laughed wickedly. It was then that she felt it. The same power she had felt the other day. She knew it was too ...
late but she spun anyway. What happened next seemed to go in slow motion. “The difference is dearie I’m not stupid enough to come alone,” he taunted.
He was enormous compared to her. The powerful cloaked vampire kicked the gun from her hand with little effort. She tried to do a round house kick, but he grabbed her leg then threw her into an alley wall. Pain shot through her as she fell to the ground.
“Stay down,” he called out calmly yet forceful, “I would hate to ruin that pretty face of yours,” he mocked. She could feel the force of his words, her body wanting to obey. She shook off the desire and pushed herself up. “Intriguing,” he stated sounding humored.
He was enormous compared to her. The powerful cloaked vampire kicked the gun from her hand with little effort. She tried to do a round house kick, but he grabbed her leg then threw her into an alley wall. Pain shot through her as she fell to the ground.
“Stay down,” he called out calmly yet forceful, “I would hate to ruin that pretty face of yours,” he mocked. She could feel the force of his words, her body wanting to obey. She shook off the desire and pushed herself up. “Intriguing,” he stated sounding humored.
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